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@@ -81,18 +81,26 @@ object, no confusion arises from this affordance.
 
 ## Constructors That Do More
 
-Implicitly calling a constructor isn’t such a good idea if its output is a
-different value than its input, or if it might have preconditions.
-
-Consider a `Request` class with a constructor `Request(Server*, Connection*)`.
-There’s no sense in which the value of the request object “is” the server and
-connection — it’s just that we can create a request that uses them. There could
-be many semantically different types that can be constructed from `{server,
-connection}`, such as a `Response`. Such a constructor should be `explicit`, so
-that we can’t pass `{server, connection}` to a function that accepts a `Request`
-(or `Response`) parameter. In such cases marking the constructor as `explicit`
-makes the code clearer for readers by requiring the target type to be named when
-it’s instantiated and helps to avoid bugs caused by unintended conversions.
+The constructor should be `explicit` when it may have preconditions or when 
+the new object is a different kind of thing than its inputs (that is, 
+when the inputs do not uniquely define the object but are used to build 
+a new thing that has additional semantic meaning or state beyond these 
+inputs).
+
+Consider a `Request` class with a constructor `Request(Server*, 
+Connection*)`. The server and connection are not converted into a 
+request object. Rather, we use this constructor to create a new object 
+that uses the inputs and has an implied direction of information flow.
+There could be many semantically different types that can be constructed 
+from `{server, connection}`, such as a `Response` going in the opposite 
+direction from a `Request`. 
+
+Such a constructor should be `explicit` so that we can’t pass 
+`{server, connection}` to a function that accepts a `Request` or 
+`Response` parameter. Marking the constructor as `explicit` makes the 
+code clearer for readers by requiring the target type (and thus the 
+intended direction) to be named when it’s instantiated. This 
+explicitness helps to avoids bugs caused by unintended conversions. 
 
 <pre class="prettyprint lang-cpp code">
 // A line is defined by two distinct points.