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# Idiomatic Rust

- [Welcome](idiomatic/welcome.md)
- [Foundations of API Design](idiomatic/foundations-api-design.md)
- [Meaningful Doc Comments](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/meaningful-doc-comments.md)
- [Who Are You Writing For?](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/meaningful-doc-comments/who-are-you-writing-for.md)
- [Library vs Application docs](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/meaningful-doc-comments/library-vs-application-docs.md)
- [Anatomy of a Doc Comment](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/meaningful-doc-comments/anatomy-of-a-doc-comment.md)
- [Name Drop and Signpost](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/meaningful-doc-comments/name-drop-signpost.md)
- [Avoid Redundancy](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/meaningful-doc-comments/avoid-redundancy.md)
- [Name and Signature are Not Enough](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/meaningful-doc-comments/what-isnt-docs.md)
- [What and Why, not How and Where](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/meaningful-doc-comments/what-why-not-how-where.md)
- [Exercise](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/meaningful-doc-comments/exercise.md)
- [Predictable API](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/predictable-api.md)
- [Naming conventions](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/predictable-api/naming-conventions.md)
- [New](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/predictable-api/naming-conventions/new.md)
- [Get](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/predictable-api/naming-conventions/01-get.md)
- [Push](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/predictable-api/naming-conventions/02-push.md)
- [Is](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/predictable-api/naming-conventions/03-is.md)
- [Mut](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/predictable-api/naming-conventions/04-mut.md)
- [With: Constructor](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/predictable-api/naming-conventions/with-constructor.md)
- [With: Copy-and-change](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/predictable-api/naming-conventions/with-copy-setter.md)
- [With: Closures](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/predictable-api/naming-conventions/with-closure.md)
- [With in normal use](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/predictable-api/naming-conventions/with-word.md)
- [Try](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/predictable-api/naming-conventions/05-try.md)
- [From](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/predictable-api/naming-conventions/07-from.md)
- [Into](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/predictable-api/naming-conventions/08-into.md)
- [Into inner](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/predictable-api/naming-conventions/into_inner.md)
- [By](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/predictable-api/naming-conventions/10-by.md)
- [Unchecked](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/predictable-api/naming-conventions/11-unchecked.md)
- [To](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/predictable-api/naming-conventions/12-to.md)
- [As and Ref](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/predictable-api/naming-conventions/13-as-and-ref.md)
- [Raw parts](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/predictable-api/naming-conventions/raw_parts.md)
- [Exercise](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/predictable-api/naming-conventions/14-mini-exercise.md)
- [Implementing Common Traits](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/predictable-api/common-traits.md)
- [Debug](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/predictable-api/common-traits/01-debug.md)
- [PartialEq and Eq](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/predictable-api/common-traits/02-partialeq-eq.md)
- [PartialOrd and Ord](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/predictable-api/common-traits/03-partialord-ord.md)
- [Hash](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/predictable-api/common-traits/04-hash.md)
- [Clone](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/predictable-api/common-traits/05-clone.md)
- [Copy](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/predictable-api/common-traits/06-copy.md)
- [Serialize and Deserialize](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/predictable-api/common-traits/07-serde.md)
- [From and Into](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/predictable-api/common-traits/08-from-into.md)
- [TryFrom and TryInto](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/predictable-api/common-traits/09-try-from-into.md)
- [Display](idiomatic/foundations-api-design/predictable-api/common-traits/10-display.md)
- [Leveraging the Type System](idiomatic/leveraging-the-type-system.md)
- [Newtype Pattern](idiomatic/leveraging-the-type-system/newtype-pattern.md)
- [Semantic Confusion](idiomatic/leveraging-the-type-system/newtype-pattern/semantic-confusion.md)
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Do you intend to add something here?

Compare: https://github.com/google/comprehensive-rust/blob/main/src/idiomatic/leveraging-the-type-system.md?plain=1

At the very least, a title and {{%segment outline}} are needed.


# Foundations of API Design

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# Meaningful Doc Comments

```rust,compile_fail
/// API for the client // ❌ Lacks detail
pub mod client {}

/// Function from A to B // ❌ Redundant
fn a_to_b(a: A) -> B {...}

/// Connects to the database. // ❌ Lacks detail │
fn connect() -> Result<(), Error> {...}
```

Doc comments are the most common form of documentation developers engage with.

Good doc comments provide information that the code, names, and types cannot,
without restating the obvious information.
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# The Anatomy of a Doc Comment

1. A brief, one-sentence summary.
2. A more detailed explanation.
3. Special sections: code examples, panics, errors, safety preconditions.

````rust,no_compile
/// Parses a key-value pair from a string.
///
/// The input string must be in the format `key=value`. Everything before the
/// first '=' is treated as the key, and everything after is the value.
///
/// # Examples
///
/// ```
/// use my_crate::parse_key_value;
/// let (key, value) = parse_key_value("lang=rust").unwrap();
/// assert_eq!(key, "lang");
/// assert_eq!(value, "rust");
/// ```
///
/// # Panics
///
/// Panics if the input is empty.
///
/// # Errors
///
/// Returns a `ParseError::Malformed` if the string does not contain `=`.
///
/// # Safety
///
/// Triggers undefined behavior if...
unsafe fn parse_key_value(s: &str) -> Result<(String, String), ParseError>

enum ParseError {
Empty,
Malformed,
}
````

<details>

- Idiomatic Rust doc comments follow a conventional structure that makes them
easier for developers to read.

- The first line of a doc comment is a single-sentence summary of the function.
Keep it concise. `rustdoc` and other tools have a strong expectation about
that: it is used as a short summary in module-level documentation and search
results.

- Next, you can provide a long, multi-paragraph description of the "why" and
"what" of the function. Use Markdown.

- Finally, you can use top-level section headers to organize your content. Doc
comments commonly use `# Examples`, `# Panics`, `# Errors`, and `# Safety` as
section titles. The Rust community expects to see relevant aspects of your API
documented in these sections.

- Rust heavily focuses on safety and correctness. Documenting behavior of your
code in case of errors is critical for writing reliable software.

- `# Panics`: If your function may panic, you must document the specific
conditions when that might happen. Callers need to know what to avoid.

- `# Errors`: For functions returning a `Result`, this section explains what
kind of errors can occur and under what circumstances. Callers need this
information to write robust error handling logic.

- **Question:** Ask the class why documenting panics is so important in a
language that prefers returning `Result`.

- **Answer:** Panics are for unrecoverable, programming errors. A library
should not panic unless a contract is violated by the caller. Documenting
these contracts is essential.

- `# Safety` comments document safety preconditions on unsafe functions that
must be satisfied, or else undefined behavior might result. They are discussed
in detail in the Unsafe Rust deep dive.

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# Avoiding Redundancy

Names and type signatures communicate a lot of information, don't repeat it in
comments!

```rust,compile_fail
// Repeats name/type information. Can omit!
/// Parses an ipv4 from a str. Returns an option for failure modes.
fn parse_ip_addr_v4(input: &str) -> Option<IpAddrV4> { ... }

// Repeats information obvious from the field name. Can omit!
struct BusinessAsset {
/// The customer id.
let customer_id: u64,
}

// Mentions the type name first thing, don't do this!
/// `ServerSynchronizer` is an orchestrator that sends local edits [...]
struct ServerSynchronizer { ... }

// Better! Focuses on purpose.
/// Sends local edits [...]
struct ServerSynchronizer { ... }

// Mentions the function name first thing, don't do this!
/// `sync_to_server` sends local edits [...]
fn sync_to_server(...)

// Better! Focuses on function.
/// Sends local edits [...]
fn sync_to_server(...)
```

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- Motivation: Documentation that merely repeats name/signature information
provides nothing new to the API user.

Additionally, signature information may change over time without the
documentation being updated accordingly!

- This is an understandable pattern to fall into!

Naive approach to "always document your code," follows this advice literally
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Consider adding the following nuance somewhere.

In Google's style guide for Rust we talk about a distinction between library code and application code:

  • Library code is expected to have a high number of users. It is tasked with solving a whole range of related problems, in a highly reusable manner.

  • Application code solves a specific problem. Thus, application code should favor simplicity and directness.

I think this distinction also applies here.

Here's my quick attempt (could be a standalone slide):

# Library vs application code

You might see elaborate documentation for fundamental APIs that repeats the
names and type signatures. Stable and highly reusable code can afford this with
a positive RoI.

- Library code:
  - has a high number of users,
  - solves a whole range of related problems,
  - often has stable APIs.

- Application code is the opposite:
  - few users,
  - solves a specific problem,
  - changes often.

Speaker notes:

- You might have seen elaborate documentation that repeats code, looks at the
  same API multiple times with many examples and case studies.  Context is key:
  who wrote it, for whom, and what material it is covering, and what resources
  did they have.

- Fundamental library code often has Elaborate documentation, for example,
  the standard library, highly reusable frameworks like serde and tokio.
  Teams responsible for this code often have appropriate resources to write and
  maintain elaborate documentation.

- Library code is often stable, so the community is going to extract a
  significant benefit from elaborate documentation before it needs to be
  reworked.

- Application code has the opposite traits: it has few users, solves a specific
  problem, and changes often. For application code elaborate documentation
  quickly becomes outdated and misleading. It is also difficult to extract a
  positive RoI from boilerplate docs even while they are up to date, because
  there are only a few users.

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WDYT about calling out the #![warn(missing_docs)] lint? Say that people should only turn it on if they can truly afford it while writing meaningful docs. This lint is more suitable for fundamental libraries than for applications.

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I think it'll need to be put in a more to explore section, a lot of material could be written on the value one can get out of lints.

but does not follow the intent.

Some tools might enforce documentation coverage, this kind of documentation is
an easy fix.

- Be aware of the purpose of different modes of documentation:

- Library code will need to be documented in ways that understand the scope of
what it is used for and the breadth of people who are trying to use it.

- Application code has a more narrow purpose, it can afford to be more simple
and direct.

- The name of an item is part of the documentation of that item.

Similarly, the signature of a function is part of the documentation of that
function.

Therefore: Some aspects of the item are already covered when you start writing
doc comments!
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Also:

Don't be pressured to repeat information just to write a neat-looking bullet list which includes every parameter.


Do not repeat information for the sake of an itemized list.

- Many areas of the standard library have minimal documentation because the name
and types do give enough information.

Rule of Thumb: What information is missing from a user's perspective? Other
than name, signature, and irrelevant details of the implementation.

- Don't explain the basics of Rust or the standard library. Assume the reader of
doc comments has an intermediate understanding of the language itself. Focus
on documenting your API.

For example, if your function returns `Result`, you don't need to explain how
`Result` or the question mark operators work.

- If there is a complex topic involved with the functions and types you're
documenting, signpost to a "source of truth" if one exists such as an internal
document, a paper, a blog post etc.

- Collaborate with Students: Go through the methods in the slide and discuss
what might be relevant to an API user.

## More to Explore

- The `#![warn(missing_docs)]` lint can be helpful for enforcing the existence
of doc comments, but puts a large burden on developers that could lead to
leaning onto these patterns of writing low-quality comments.

This kind of lint should only be enabled if the people maintaining a project
can afford to keep up with its demands, and usually only for library-style
crates rather than application code.

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# Exercise: Dialog on Details

Unnecessary details can sometimes be indicative of something that does need
documentation.

```rust
/// Sorts a slice. Implemented using recursive quicksort.
fn sort_quickly<T: Ord>(to_sort: &mut [T]) { /* ... */
}
```

<details>

- Consider the example here, we discussed in
[what and why, not how and where](what-why-not-how-where.md) that internal
details are unlikely relevant to someone reading documentation.

Here we're discussing a counterexample.

- Ask the class: Is this comment necessary for this function?

- Narrative: Playing the part of an intermediary between the class and the
author, such as a PM, manager, etc. tell the class that the author of this
function is pushing back.

- Ask the class: Why would an author of this kind of comment push back?

If the class asks why the author is pushing back, do not give details yet.

- Ask the class: Why would the caller need to know the sorting algorithm in use?

- Narrative: "Come back" from a meeting with the original author, explain to the
class that this function is application code that is called on untrusted data
that
[could be crafted maliciously to cause quadratic behavior during sorting](https://www.cs.dartmouth.edu/~doug/mdmspe.pdf).

- Ask the class: Now we have more detail, how should we comment this function?

The point being implementation detail vs not depends a lot on what the public
contract is (e.g., can you supply untrusted data or not), and this requires
careful judgement.

Consider if a comment is explaining that a for-loop is used (unnecessary
detail) or if it is explaining that the algorithms used internally have known
exploits (documentation draws attention to the wrong thing).

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# Library vs application docs

You might see elaborate documentation for fundamental APIs that repeats the\
names and type signatures. Stable and highly reusable code can afford this with\
a positive RoI.

- Library code:
- has a high number of users,
- solves a whole range of related problems,
- often has stable APIs.

- Application code is the opposite:
- few users,
- solves a specific problem,
- changes often.

<details>

- You might have seen elaborate documentation that repeats code, looks at the\
same API multiple times with many examples and case studies. Context is key:\
who wrote it, for whom, and what material it is covering, and what resources\
did they have.

- Fundamental library code often has Elaborate documentation, for example,\
the standard library, highly reusable frameworks like serde and tokio.\
Teams responsible for this code often have appropriate resources to write and\
maintain elaborate documentation.

- Library code is often stable, so the community is going to extract a\
significant benefit from elaborate documentation before it needs to be\
reworked.

- Application code has the opposite traits: it has few users, solves a specific\
problem, and changes often. For application code elaborate documentation\
quickly becomes outdated and misleading. It is also difficult to extract a\
positive RoI from boilerplate docs even while they are up to date, because\
there are only a few users.

</details>
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